In the last lesson we wrote our own persuasive advert for the Train Controller so that he can decide which train he wants to join his team.

Today we are going to read our writing, check it and edit it. 

We can also add more information if we have something to add.

Let's read these pages from the 'How to Train a Train' book. 

Is there anything that you can magpie to add to your writing?

Don't forget to check for...

• Finger spaces
• Capital letters for names and at the start of sentences. 
  full stops and ! 
  ‘When’
  Conjunctions - 'and', 'because' 
• Neat handwriting