Wednesday
Circle the correct answers.
Wednesday 25th June
Today you are going to be writing an independent flashback story from the perspective of Albert.
1. Structure & Organisation
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I have written in the first person ("I", "me", "my").
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My narrative is written in the past tense, with a clear flashback to an earlier time.
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The flashback is clearly introduced (e.g., using a trigger like an object, sound, or memory).
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There is a clear return to the present by the end of the narrative.
2. Language & Style
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I use descriptive language to show feelings, thoughts, and setting.
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I include figurative language (e.g., similes, metaphors, personification) to create imagery.
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I vary my sentence openers and lengths for effect.
3. Character & Emotion
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I show how the main character feels during both the present and flashback scenes.
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I use internal thoughts and reflections to show the character’s emotions and growth.
4. Cohesion & Devices
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I use time adverbials (e.g., Suddenly, Years ago, At that moment) to guide the reader.
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I use transitions between the present and the past smoothly.
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I use paragraphs to separate ideas and shifts in time.
Wednesday 25th June
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